Wednesday, 29 September 2010

Essay 1 Feedback

High Level 2 - High D (on the C border)
Your answer demonstrates an understanding of the question and you present a basic argument with heavy reliance on teacher notes. To move out of the D grade area into C you need to demonstrate understanding through use of your own argument structure, examples of media products and your own insight. To complete this essay, you need to move the introduction to John Fiske, below the introduction to Adorno.

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